I never thought my life would depend on pretending to be dead.

My name is Ana Valdés, and at fifty-eight years old, I never imagined my life would depend on pretending to be dead. Yet there I was, lying on sharp rocks at the foot of a ravine in the Sierra Madre Oriental mountains of Nuevo León, warm blood clinging to my cheek and every bone in my body protesting in pain. A few feet away, my husband, Juan, lay motionless, his breath coming in short, ragged gasps.

Just seconds before, our daughter Andrea had smiled sweetly at me, extending her hand as if she wanted to help me cross a stretch of slippery rock and then, without a single hesitation… she pushed me.

My body hit the rocks with such force that I felt the whole world turn upside down. As I struggled to breathe again, Juan squeezed my hand and whispered something that chilled me more than the fall:

—Pretend you’re dead.

Upstairs, I heard Andrea’s voice, soft and quick:

—She’s not moving… Neither is Dad.

Her husband, Mario, replied:

—Good. Just stick to the plan.

Follow the plan.

It wasn’t shock.
It wasn’t panic.

It was a plan.

I felt my stomach clench.

As their footsteps faded down the path, their voices grew fainter… until, suddenly, they stopped. Then I heard Andrea’s voice again, as if she were rehearsing:

—If anyone asks, they slipped. The floor was wet. They lost their balance. We tried to help them.

Every word hurt more than the broken rib.

When they finally left completely, I felt Juan’s weak hand squeeze mine.

—Ana —he murmured in a hoarse voice—, I have to tell you something… something about Ricardo.

Our son. Our firstborn. The child we lost twenty years ago.

My heart sank.

“Not now,” I whispered. “Save your strength.”

But he denied it very slowly.

—You need to know why Andrea did this.

The cold air enveloped us, sharp and cutting.

“The night Ricardo died,” he stammered, “I didn’t tell you everything. I saw Andrea… she wasn’t in her room. I followed her. She was with Ricardo near the ravine… they were arguing about the money she had stolen. He was confronting her.”

I held my breath.

—Juan… what are you saying?

“I saw him fall,” he whispered. “And I believed him when he said it was an accident. I covered for him. I thought I was protecting our family.”

My world spun. Juan’s next words completely shattered what little remained whole inside me.

—Ana… we’ve been living a lie for twenty years. And now Andrea wants us to disappear because she knows I’m ready to confess.

I stared at him, paralyzed, as the truth seeped into my bones like ice.

That, then, was no longer an accident.
And now, neither was this.

I wanted to scream, get up, run… but every breath was like a knife. The ground beneath me shifted. Juan’s confession echoed in my head like a second heartbeat. Ricardo hadn’t “slipped.” Something much darker had happened, and now, twenty years later, we were both at the bottom of another ravine because of the same daughter.

A branch broke right above us.

Juan’s fingers gripped my hand even tighter.

—Ana, don’t move.

Steps. Slow, careful, calculated.

Andrea had returned.

I tried to stay completely still, every muscle screaming at me to run. Mario murmured something too low to understand, and then Andrea whispered, cold as a knife:

—I just want to make sure they’re really dead. We can’t risk them waking up.

My pulse was pounding so loudly that I was afraid he would hear it.

He came even closer.

And then… distant voices on the path. Two hikers were chatting animatedly on their way to the viewpoint. Andrea froze.

“We have to go now,” Mario hissed.

His footsteps faded quickly, swallowed by the forest.

A few eternal seconds passed before I dared to release the breath I was holding. Juan wiped the blood from the corner of his lips with trembling fingers.

“We need to get help before they come back,” he murmured. “If they suspect we’re still alive…”

I didn’t need him to finish the sentence.

Gathering what little strength I had left, I rolled onto my side, stifling a scream. I felt something move horribly against my ribs. Broken. Definitely broken. But I could still move.

The slope was steep, but there were small patches of earth between the rocks. I crawled to a slightly flatter section. Juan tried to follow me, but when he tried to stand up, he let out a muffled groan.

“No,” I told him urgently. “Save your strength. I’ll get help.”

But even as I was saying that, I knew there was no way I could climb back up to the lookout point on my own.

Then I saw something that gave me a spark of hope: a small sign nailed next to the path, a few meters further up.

“Range station 1 km away.”

If we managed to get there, we had a chance.

I bent down and put Juan’s arm around my shoulders. The pain exploded like fire in my side, but I moved forward.

Three meters.

Six.

Ten.

We stumbled and crawled, advancing inch by inch, fighting against the terrain, the pain, and the terror of imagining Andrea returning to finish what she had started.

Halfway to the sign, Juan collapsed.

—Ana… stop.

“No,” I whispered. “Not after everything. Not after what happened with Ricardo.”

He looked up at me, tears welling up in the dust on his face.

—There’s still something else. There’s something you don’t know. About why he hated him. Why he hates us.

My blood ran cold.

“What else could it be?” I whispered.

Juan swallowed.

“The money she stole… wasn’t from our savings.” Her voice trembled. “It was from Ricardo’s inheritance fund. Money she should never have touched.”

I felt an icy chill run down my spine.

I watched him as his words fell heavily between us. Ricardo’s inheritance. The money he never got to use. That explained Andrea’s despair, her fear, her rage… but not her cruelty.

—And he pushed him for money? —I asked in a barely audible voice.

Juan closed his eyes.

“Not just because of the money. Ricardo told her he was going to tell us. She panicked.”

A lump formed in my throat. Our sweet, trusting child… murdered by the very older sister he trusted.

I forced myself to keep going, dragging Juan along with me. Every few steps, his breathing became heavier, shorter. His face had turned livid.

—Stay with me— I insisted. We’re almost there.

I didn’t know if it was true, but I needed him to believe it.

Again, branches moving behind us.

My heart stopped for a second.

Two voices, but they sounded young and relaxed. They were two teenagers coming down the path. As they rounded the bend, they froze when they saw us.

“Oh my God!” exclaimed the girl. “Are you all right? What happened to you?”

I didn’t waste a second.

“Call 911, please,” I managed to say. “Right now.”

The boy took out his cell phone and dialed. The girl knelt beside Juan, offering him water with trembling hands. For the first time since the fall, a small light of hope flickered in my chest.

Within minutes—though it felt like hours to me—we heard sirens in the distance. The park rangers arrived first, then the paramedics coming down the path with stretchers. When they lifted Juan up, he squeezed my wrist with surprising strength.

—Ana… listen.

“Save your strength,” I whispered.

But he weakly denied it.

—You need to know the last part. Why Andrea wants us to die right now.

My vision blurred with tears.

-Juan…

He swallowed hard.

“I never told her that they found out sixteen years ago. I hired a forensic accountant. He uncovered everything. I spoke with Andrea alone. I told her she had time, until we retired, to fix what she’d done… or I’d tell you everything.”

I held my breath.

—Why didn’t you tell me?

“Because I wanted to believe he was going to change,” her voice broke. “But he didn’t. And when we updated the will… he went haywire again.”

Before I could answer, they took him to the helicopter. They put me on another one.

Entire hours unfolded inside the hospital. Surgeries. Needles. Bandages.

And then, the police.

We were questioned separately. Andrea and Mario had reported an “accident,” but their story fell apart almost immediately when the hikers gave their statements, and when forensic experts found fresh footprints, matching Mario’s boots, at a dangerous spot near the viewpoint.

At dawn, Andrea and Mario were arrested.

When the officers left, I sat by Juan’s bed, holding his hand. Our family was devastated, but the truth—buried for so long—had finally come to light.

“We lost Ricardo,” I whispered. “But we didn’t lose ourselves.”

Juan nodded weakly.

And, for the first time in twenty years, we were free.

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